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Darkness.
Cold. Silence. Where did the laughter go? What happened to all the people relaxing
on the beach? It was so peaceful just a moment ago. Surrounded by Friends,
playing games. The sun hot on our skin. The smell of salt on our noses. Noise
surrounding us. Now? Now all that had disappeared.
A moment
ago I was playing with my friends on the sand, and suddenly a hole opened and
swallowed us. I remember falling. I remember feeling as if gravity didn’t
exist. I remember pain.
I yelled
calling for help. Calling my friends. Looking for something, anything. Just more
than darkness. More than cold rocks. I started to panic as nobody answered. Heavy
silence filled the air. Its pressure crushing. My breathing became frantic.
Heart beating loudly. Images of my friends crushed under rocks flashed on my
mind.
Finally, a
voice echoed on the cave, bringing me back from those awful images. My name. I
started walking toward the direction I believed the voice came from. Hands
touching the walls to guide me. Steps slow and careful. I yelled again, calling
that same voice. This time the answer came immediately. I walked faster. Hope
blooming on my heart.
I kept
calling for them, wanting to guide myself with their voice. Suddenly, they stopped responding. I stood I the middle
of the darkness, heart beating loud in my ears. My chest raised and fell
quickly as I struggled to breathe. I started running, yelling, begging for them
to answer me.
I ran and
ran looking for a figure to be distinguishable on the thick darkness. I yelled
until my voice turned hoarse. But nobody answered.
I paused
just enough to even my breathing. My legs burned and trembled as I tried to
keep going. I couldn’t give up just yet. There must be something I could do to
find them. To get out. I kept going as my body screamed in exhaustion.
I started
tripping on uneven ground as my body failed to respond me. I collapsed on the
ground unable to move my body. My eyes started feeling heavy, but I fought to
stay awake. As I finally closed my eyes, I saw the sunlight slipping on the
cave through a hole just big enough to fit a human.
Thanks for the stories you write, I hope to continue giving you challenges so that you can offer me stories.
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